I went to an outlet mall and bought a jacket. It was really cute and nice. It was really bad weather so my umbrella was broken by the wind. I enjoyed myself and had a great time.

Roy

May 17, 2025 11:36 PM

Corrections · 1

I went to an outlet mall and bought a jacket. It was really cute and nice. There was really bad weather so my umbrella was broken by the wind. I enjoyed myself and had a great time.

I have suggested using "there" to avoid any confusion about what "it" is here.

May 18, 2025 1:39 AM

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