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The Tim じぁん!!!
It rained all day today. I woke up this morning with a noticeable headache and a scratchy throat, definitely caught a cold somehow! Mom checked my temperature, and sure enough, I had a slight fever too. Ended up calling in sick, that’s the second time this year, how annoying! Mom already had to take MeeMaw to her doctor’s appointment this morning, so she asked them to prescribe me some aspirin while they were there. Now I’m on congee duty for the next few days. I figure our family’s had way too much congee this year.
May 19, 2025 11:39 AM
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It rained all day today. I woke up this morning with a noticeable headache and a
scratchy throat, definitely caught a cold somehow! Mom checked my temperature,
and sure enough, I had a slight fever too. Ended up calling in sick, that’s the
second time this year, how annoying! Mom had already had to take MeeMaw to her
doctor’s appointment this morning, so she asked them to prescribe me some
aspirin while they were there. Now I’m on congee duty for the next few days. I
figure our family’s had way too much congee this year.
Get well soon!
May 19, 2025 2:03 PM
It rained all day today. I woke up this morning with a noticeable headache and a scratchy throat, definitely caught a cold somehow! Mom checked my temperature, and sure enough, I had a slight fever too. Ended up calling in sick, that’s the second time this year, how annoying! Mom already had to take MeeMaw to her doctor’s appointment this morning, so she asked them to prescribe me some aspirin while they were there. Now I’m on congee duty for the next few days. I figure our family’s had way too much congee this year.
Your original is correct. There are no grammatical errors. However, just for your knowledge, it is written in a very informal way. If that's your intention, then great job!
May 19, 2025 7:07 PM
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The Tim じぁん!!!
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English
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