This is Guayabetal Cundinamarca Colombia. A beaurifull place. We have two river. To the right is black river and to the left is white River. I live nigh of white River. In summer white River the peop

Search from various English teachers...

Anderson Aya

This is Guayabetal Cundinamarca Colombia. A beaurifull place. We have two river. To the right is black river and to the left is white River. I live nigh of white River. In summer white River the peoples go to swim. Because the water is crystal. This place is very turistic. Is the color brawn because in Colombia it is winter. On the other hand, black river always is black. That is union of two rivers. (other day I show my hause.)

Nov 22, 2020 6:48 PM

Corrections · 4

This is Guayabetal Cundinamarca Colombia. A beautiful place. We have two rivers. To the right is the Black River and to the left is the White River. I live next to the White River. In summer, people go to swim in the White River, because the water is crystal clear. This place is attracts a lot of tourists. The river is (now?) brown because it is winter in Colombia. On the other hand, the Black River always is black. That is the union of the two rivers. (Next time (?) I will show my house.)

Hi! I offered some corrections to your passage. Names of rivers are capitalized, and often you can condense the sentence in English to make it more accurate. 😀 hope it helps!

November 22, 2020

Quick spell check corrections : Beaurifull - beautiful Nigh - unsure what you want to say here Brawn - Brown Now coming to sentences: 1. I live on the white river side 2. In summer people swim or go to swim at white river because the water is crystal clear during summer. 3. Now the water color is brown due to winter season in Columbia ( I assumed this is what you are trying to convey based on entire context) 4. Black river is always black 5. Another day I will show my house Hope this helps. Keep learning mi Amigo. Adios.

November 22, 2020

This is Guayabetal, Cundinamarca, Colombia. It's a beautiful place. We have two rivers. To the right is the Black River and to the left is the White River. I live near the White River. In the summer, people go to the White River to swim because the water is crystal-clear. This place is very touristic. The color is brown because it is winter in Colombia. On the other hand, the Black River is always black. That is the confluence of the two rivers. (another day, I'll show my house.)

November 22, 2020

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!