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90 day's training: Day 19
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I listen to classic music particularly orchestra nowadays. I believe it might shape my music sense.
2) I like watching some instruments who plays melody when I visit a concert. Then, I always think about the composer.
3) I am listening to or watching a video of a summer concert by Vienna Philharmonic orchestra during I am writing this text.
4) My husband feels like listening the concert now, so he has started the video.
5) I want to watch a continuance of a German drama which I watched before I started working today.
Sep 30, 2024 12:57 PM
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90 day's training: Day 19
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I listen to classical music particularly orchestra nowadays. I believe it might shape my music sense.
2) I like watching some instruments which play melodies when I visit a concert. Then, I always think about the composer.
3) I am listening to, or watching a video of a summer concert by Vienna Philharmonic orchestra while I am writing this text.
4) My husband feels like listening to the concert now, so he just started the video.
5) I want to continue watching German drama which I watched before I have started working today.
October 1, 2024
90 day's training: Day 19
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I listen to classical music, particularly orchestral music nowadays. I believe it might shape my music(al) sense.
2) I like watching the instruments that play the melody when I go to/attend a concert. Then, I always think about the composer.
3) I am listening to or watching a video of a summer concert by the Vienna Philharmonic Orchestra while I am writing this.
4) My husband feels like listening to the concert now, so he has started the video.
5) I want to watch the next episode of a German drama which/that I watched before I started working today.
Instrments THAT play, or Instrumentalists WHO play. (Who is for people/living creatures). Capitalize Orchestra if it's part of a proper name. Nice job!
October 1, 2024
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English, German, Japanese
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