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My favorite hobby is swimming. Growing up I had never had interest in swimming, because none of my family members swim so I had no one to look up to. But when I was in my last year of university, I was dying of boredom so I felt like I had to find a new activity or hobby. Long story short, I met few friends who loved swimming, and I just joined them eventhough I couldn't swim at all. After I went to the pool together with them about 2 or 3 times, I became interested in swimming so I frequently went to the pool and learned how to swim on my own by watching people there 🏊 And yup, swimming became my favorite hobby ever since. _________________ #1 Hi feedback and correction are always welcome! Thanks in advance!
Feb 10, 2021 8:29 AM
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My favorite hobby is swimming. Growing up I had never had any interest in swimming, because none of my family members swim so I had no one to look up to. But when I was in my last year of university, I was dying of boredom so I felt like I had to find a new activity or hobby. Long story short, I met few friends who loved swimming, and I just joined them even though I couldn't swim at all. After I went to the pool together with them about 2 or 3 times, I became interested so I frequently went to the pool and learned to swim on my own by watching people there 🏊 And yup, swimming has been my favorite hobby ever since. _________________ #1 Hi feedback and correction are always welcome! Thanks in advance!
February 10, 2021
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My favorite hobby is swimming. Growing up I had never had any interest in swimming, because none of my family members swim so I had no one to look up to. But when I was in my last year of university, I was dying of boredom so I felt like I had to find a new activity or hobby. Long story short, I met a few friends who loved swimming, and I just joined them even though I couldn't swim at all. After I went to the pool with them about 2 or 3 times, I became interested in swimming so I frequently went to the pool and learned how to swim on my own by watching people there 🏊 And yup, swimming has been my favorite hobby ever since. _________________ #1 Hi feedback and correction are always welcome! Thanks in advance!
February 10, 2021
My favorite hobby is swimming. Growing up I had never taken interest in swimming, because none of my family member swim so I had no one to look up to. But when I was in my last year of university, I was dying of boredom so I felt like I had to find a new activity or hobby. Long story short, I met few friends who loved swimming, and I just joined them eventhough I couldn't swim at all. After I went to the pool together with them about 2 or 3 times, I became intereste in swimming so I quickly went to the pool and learned how to swim on my own by watching people there 🏊 And yup, swimming became my favorite hobby ever since. _________________ #1 Hi feedback and correction are always welcome! Thanks in advance!
February 10, 2021
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