Improved Alternative: ----- Summer is a great time to visit Harbin. Animal rescue plays an important role in our society. A society is judged by how it treats its most vulnerable — and that includes animals, not just people. ---- Tip -- • Use “Animal rescue is important in our society” instead of “animal rescue is important…” to start a new sentence correctly with a capital letter. -- • “A civilisation is measured by…” is a famous quote — keeping this formal is fine, but “judged by” is more conversational. -- • The phrase “not only… but also…” should keep the same grammar structure after both parts, e.g., “treat… human beings” and “also… animals.” -- • “Its weakest members” is fine, but “its most vulnerable” is a more natural phrase in modern English. -- • Use “with care” or “well” for smoother sentence endings. --