I gave a presentation today. It’s about the oldest hotel in Japan. We visited there three weeks ago. It was impressive because the atmosphere was very nice. I’m interested in hotel business, so it was

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I gave a presentation today. It’s about the oldest hotel in Japan. We visited there three weeks ago. It was impressive because the atmosphere was very nice. I’m interested in hotel business, so it was very fun and, I learned many things. I think the presentation was a success. It was a group presentation, and we did our best.

Jul 11, 2025 1:54 PM

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I gave a presentation today. It was about the oldest hotel in Japan. We visited it three weeks ago. It was impressive because the atmosphere was very nice. I’m interested in the hotel business, so it was very fun and I learned many things. I think the presentation was a success. It was a group presentation and we did our best.

Nice work! Here are a few small corrections: 1. “It was” instead of “It’s” because the presentation already happened, so we keep it in past tense. 2. “We visited it” instead of visited “there” because we use “it” to refer to a place. 3. “The hotel business” because we use “the” when talking about an entire industry.

Jul 11, 2025 7:39 PM

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