Eating sugar is not so bad because it gives energy. If someone eats more sugar, it may gives bad impact on his health. He can suffer from various diseases like obesity, hyperglycemia etc. Even wound t

Daizy

Eating sugar is not so bad because it gives energy. If someone eats more sugar, it may gives bad impact on his health. He can suffer from various diseases like obesity, hyperglycemia etc. Even wound takes many days to heal.

Sep 20, 2023 4:17 PM

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Eating sugar is not so bad because it gives/provides energy. If someone eats too much sugar, it may have a bad impact on their health. They can suffer from various diseases like obesity, hyperglycemia, etc. Even a wound takes many days to heal.

September 20, 2023

Eating sugar is not so bad because it gives energy. If someone eats more sugar, it may have a bad impact on his health. He can suffer from various diseases like obesity, hyperglycemia, etc. Even a wound takes many days to heal.

September 20, 2023

Eating sugar is not so bad because it gives energy. If someone eats too much sugar, it may have a bad impact on their health. They can suffer from various diseases like obesity, hyperglycemia etc.

Great work, as we are talking about 'someone' we would usually use they/their as we can be talking about either gender.

September 20, 2023

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