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Have you ever been in Indonesia and visit Bogor?
I live in Bogor and have been living here since I was born. Bogor is a small city near Jakarta. It’s about 40 minutes driving time to Jakarta. But the temperature is totally different. In Jakarta, the temperature is almost always dry and hot. While Bogor has very cool temperature, even not as cool as Bandung. That’s because rain often fall in Bogor, so Bogor is called as rain city. Not only that, Bogor is surrounded by mountains that makes the view is good too. Also there is a very big park in the city hall called Kebun Raya Bogor. This city forest gives huge role to product fresh air in the city.
Dec 3, 2020 10:56 PM
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Have you ever been to Indonesia and visit Bogor? I live in Bogor and have been
living here since I was born. Bogor is a small city near Jakarta. It’s about 40
minutes of driving time to Jakarta. But the temperature is different. In
In Jakarta, the temperature is almost always dry and hot. While Bogor has a very cool
temperature, even not as cool as Bandung. That’s because rain often falls in
Bogor, so Bogor is called a rain city. Not only that, Bogor is surrounded by
mountains that make the view is good too. Also, there is a very big park in the
city hall called Kebun Raya Bogor. This city forest gives a huge role in producing
fresh air in the city.
December 4, 2020
Have you ever been to Indonesia and visited Bogor? I live in Bogor and have been
living here since I was born. Bogor is a small city near Jakarta. It’s about 40
minutes driving time to Jakarta (It's a forty minute drive to Jakarta). But the temperature is totally different. In
Jakarta, the temperature is almost always dry and hot. While Bogor has very cool
temperature, even not as cool as Bandung. That’s because rain often falls in
Bogor, so Bogor is called the rainy city. Not only that, Bogor is surrounded by
mountains that makes the view nice too. There is also a very big park in the
city hall called Kebun Raya Bogor. This city's forest plays a huge role in producing
fresh air in the city.
Very nice try. Minor mistakes
December 9, 2020
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