Kseniia
Hello, my dear Anna! You can not imagine how thankful I am for your help. I am writing this letter to give you all the details about my apartment. So, firstly, you must to call to my neighbor Mr. Haas I left the spare key to. I will write his number below. You should know that I have installed an alarm system recently. You must enter the security code (it is a date of my birth, I sure that you remember it) on the panel next to the door. Also, I have to mention about my cute kitty which is called Max. You must feed him twice a day. I left the pack with his special nutrition with instruction on the table in the kitchen. And I beg you, do not forget about fresh water for him! I guess, I should not ask you something more, but I have to do it. Please, check my mailbox regularly, otherwise I will not be able to open it after returning. I hope it does not make it too difficult for you. And finally, just close the door and return my key to Mr.Haas on 27th May, when I am going to back home. See you soon. Best wishes, Kseniia.
Mar 22, 2021 11:28 AM
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Hello, my dear Anna! You can not imagine how thankful I am for your help. I am writing this letter to give you all the details about my apartment. So, firstly, you must to call to my neighbor Mr. Haas I left the spare key to. I will write his number below. You should know that I have installed an alarm system recently. You must enter the security code (it is a date of my birth, I sure that you remember it) on the panel next to the door. Also, I have to mention about my cute kitty which is called Max. You must feed him twice a day. I left the pack with his special nutrition with instruction on the table in the kitchen. And I beg you, do not forget about fresh water for him! I guess, I should not ask you something more, but I have to do it. Please, check my mailbox regularly, otherwise I will not be able to open it after returning. I hope it does not make it too difficult for you. And finally, just close the door and return my key to Mr.Haas on 27th May, when I am going to back home. See you soon. Best wishes, Kseniia. Hi there, can you share some tips for Writing Task 1?
March 22, 2021
Hello, my dear Anna! You can not imagine how thankful I am for your help. I am writing this letter to give you all the details about my apartment. So, firstly, you must to call to my neighbor Mr. Haas I left the spare key to. I will write his number below. You should know that I have installed an alarm system recently. You must enter the security code (it is a date of my birth, I sure that you remember it) on the panel next to the door. Also, I have to mention about my cute kitty which is called Max. You must feed him twice a day. I left the pack with his special nutrition with instruction on the table in the kitchen. And I beg you, do not forget about fresh water for him! I guess, I should not ask you something more, but I have to do it. Please, check my mailbox regularly, otherwise I will not be able to open it after returning. I hope it does not make it too difficult for you. And finally, just close the door and return my key to Mr.Haas on 27th May, when I am going to back home. See you soon. Best wishes, Kseniia.
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March 22, 2021
Hello, my dear Anna! You can not imagine how thankful I am for your help. I am writing this letter to give you all the details about my apartment. So, firstly, you must call my neighbor Mr. Haas. I left the spare key with him. I will write his number below.(phone number or apartment number) You should know that I have installed an alarm system recently. You must enter the security code (it is my date of my birth, I am sure that you remember it) on the panel next to the door. Also, I have to mention my cute kitty who is called Max. You must feed him twice a day. I have left the pack with his special nutrition and instructions on the table in the kitchen. And I beg you, please do not forget about fresh water for him! I guess, I should not ask you for anything more, but I have to. Please, check my mailbox regularly, otherwise I will not be able to open it after returning. I hope it does not make it too difficult for you. And finally, just close the door and return my key to Mr.Haas on 27th May, when I am going to come back home. See you soon. Best wishes, Kseniia.
Well done, this all pretty good. Not much to add. Maybe you use 'must' too much. If you are asking a friend I would use 'please', 'it would be helpful if', 'you really need to' etc. Maybe it would be normal to see your friend when you return and get the key from them. Maybe give them a present!
March 22, 2021
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