Is this sentence OK?

He's so sick.

II I say;
It would be a miracle for him to make it the night.

Question

Is this sentence OK?

He's so sick.

II I say;
It would be a miracle for him to make it the night.

Answer

Hi,
Your sentence needs a small correction:

“It would be a miracle for him to make it through the night.”

Adding “through” makes it natural and correct.

Answer

It would be a miracle for him to make it THROUGH the night.