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The sentence here has many “and”. How can the nouns be classified?
It may also poison plankton, fish and shellfish and the animals and people that eat them.
1) plankton
2) fish and shellfish
3) the animals and people
Or
1) plankton, fish and shellfish
2) the animals and people
Jan 20, 2024 11:03 PM
Answers · 3
2
I think your second grouping is correct.
As written, the second "and" seems to draw a line between one group and another.
Your second grouping seems logical, "plankton, fish and shellfish" are animals poisoned directly by something (red tide?), while "animals and people who eat them" are poisoned at second hand.
I think I would leave out the first "and" and put a comma after "shellfish:"
"It may also poison plankton, fish, shellfish, and the animals and people who eat them."
January 21, 2024
1
Do people eat plankton? Yes and no. They don't eat it directly but they do eat the animals that eat it. Hence your sentence has built-in ambiguity that is best removed:
"It may poison plankton. Thereby, fish and shellfish that consume plankton are poisoned as well and the toxic chain extends all the way up to human beings."
January 21, 2024
1
it's a complex sentence
1st and unites 2 parts of a complex sentence
2nd and unites two subjects "animals and people"
January 21, 2024
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