Hey there! Hope you all are doing great. Today, I woke at 10:30AM pretty late :p then i got fresh and had my breakfast by 12 after which i attended one of my classes read a few pages of newspaper and

Ritika Rawat

Hey there! Hope you all are doing great. Today, I woke at 10:30AM pretty late :p then i got fresh and had my breakfast by 12 after which i attended one of my classes read a few pages of newspaper and went to gym ! After returning i took a quick shower and went with my father to shop for tomorrow's college fest! Did not do much of the day still improving day by day. And here I'm now signing off by writing this short average day experience!

Apr 7, 2022 6:02 PM

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Invitee

Hey there! Hope you're all doing great. Today, I woke up pretty late at 10:30AM :p then I got freshened up and ate breakfast by 12 and after that I went to one of my classes, read a few pages of a newspaper and went to the gym! After returning I took a quick shower and went with my father to shop for tomorrow's college fest! Did not do much today, but I'm still improving day by day. And here I'm now signing off by writing about my short average day experience!

I'm not sure what tone you were going for so I made corrections to make it sound more casual. What you wrote sounded very formal and not really the kind of tone I would expect from something like this.

April 7, 2022

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