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Today was a solitary day. I went for a small hike to a pond in a bush, close from my home. I wanted to see a new friend, it’s a bird pretty rare over here, named Baltimore Oriole. He was doing his morning toilet. Its wonderful plumage is a really bright orange and black. He is always on the top of the same tree, because his nest is there. There was also ten green frogs, swimming in the pond, I could only see their heads, they were bright under this sunny day, with two big sparkling eyes. The scene made me smile and cheered me up.
Jun 8, 2025 9:02 PM
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Today was a solitary day. I went for a small hike to a pond in a bush, close
from my home. I wanted to see a new friend, it’s a bird pretty rare over here,
named Baltimore Oriole. He was doing his morning toilet. Its wonderful plumage
is a really bright orange and black. He is always on the top of the same tree,
because his nest is there. There was also ten green frogs, swimming in the pond,
I could only see their heads, they were bright under this sunny day, with two
big sparkling eyes. The scene made me smile and cheered me up.
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June 11, 2025
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Claire
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English, French, Italian, Spanish
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Italian, Spanish
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