Daniel Sander
I think my country is a very good place to know, the're a lot of food, and beautiful places to know, like Cristo Redentor, gramado's city too
Oct 6, 2021 11:45 PM
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I think my country is a very good place to go to. There is a lot of great food and beautiful places to visit, for example, the statue of Christ the Redeemer, and Gramado city.
Nice writing Daniel, Brazil sounds like a great place. I have just tidied up a few sentences for you. If you notice I have changed Cristo Redentor into the English name, because you are writing for English speakers, who may not know what you meant. If you had wanted to keep the original name in there, an option would be to write “for example, Cristo Redentor (the statue of Christ the Redeemer), and…” Hope my suggestions are helpful. All the best for you English learning! Anna
October 7, 2021
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