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Hi everyone
I admire to my father , he is so kind and patient, i know a lot of people complain to their father , they are not patient and kind and have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my father, he is also athletic and love football and support his team and he love it so much and like swimming and do exercises in morning.
Jan 24, 2023 10:37 AM
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Hi everyone .
I admire my father, he is so kind and patient. I know a lot of people complain about their fathers, they are not patient and kind and are very strict, so I am so proud of my father. He is also athletic and loves football and support his team and he loves it so much, he also likes swimming and does exercises in the mornings.
January 25, 2023
Hi everyone I admire my father, he is so kind and patient, I know a lot of
people complain to their father, they are not patient and kind and have strict
instructions, so I am so proud of my father, he is also athletic and love
football and support his team he loves it so much and like swimming and do
exercises in the morning.
January 25, 2023
Hi everyone
I admire my father, he is so kind and patient, I know a lot of people complain about their fathers, that they are not patient and kind and have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my father. He is also athletic and loves football and supports his team. He loves it so much. He also likes swimming and doing exercises in the morning.
My common observation is where bundling most of the sentences together and not adding commars nor adding fullstops. That was one of my main observations and I have added that change
January 24, 2023
Hello everyone. I admire my father because he is so kind and patient. I know a lot of people complain to their father, they are not patient and kind and they have strict instructions, so I am so proud of my father. He loves football and he supports his team, he loves it so much and he likes swimming, he is also athletic and he does different exercises in the morning.
January 24, 2023
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fahad aldossari
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Arabic, English
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English
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