Olga
Hi, everybody. Can anybody to help check my a little essay? My dream dream. Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and i'm not exception. My dream room isn't small and very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white walls. Along a long wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on the wall opposite to a lavand sofa. Next to the sofa there is a a computer table with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the right id the sofa there is a small fridge with ice creams and drinks in it. Also in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because i have robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I like my room.
Jan 28, 2023 10:35 AM
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Hi, everybody. Could somebody please help check my little essay, called My dream room? Everyone dreams of having their own ideal room, and I'm no exception. My dream room is spacious and very comfortable. It has got white walls and two windows. Along one of the walls, there is a LED light. On the opposite wall, there is a big, black TV, which I watch on my lavender sofa. Next to the sofa, there is my computer table, with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table, I have my black laptop. On the other side the sofa, there is a small fridge with drinks inside, as well as ice cream in the freezer. Also, in the left corner, I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never a mess because I have robot, which tidies it up when I sleep. I really like my room.
January 28, 2023
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Hi, everybody. Can anybody help me check my little essay? My dream dream. - did you mean your cherished dream (заветная мечта)? Everyone dreams of having his or her (their) ideal room and I'm not an exception. My dream room isn't small but very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white walls. Along a long wall of my room there is LED lighting. There is a big black TV set on the wall opposite a lavender sofa. Next to the sofa there is a computer table with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. To the right of the sofa there is a small fridge with ice creams and drinks in it. Also, in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because I have a robot, that tidies my room when I sleep. I like my room.
Good job, Olga! You have a really nice room 👍
January 28, 2023
Hi, everybody. Can anybody to help check my a little essay? My dream dream. Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and i'm not exception. My dream room isn't small and very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white walls. Along a long wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on the wall opposite to a lavand sofa. Next to the sofa there is a a computer table with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the right id the sofa there is a small fridge with ice creams and drinks in it. Also in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because i have robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I like my room.
I think that it is fine to say "his or her" room since room is singular and we don't have a singular posessive pronoun for both make and female. Instead we tend to use "their" but unfortunately it is pleural and I don't think that it's correct.
January 28, 2023
Hi, everybody. Can anybody to help check my a little essays? My dream dream. Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and I'mnot exception. My dream room isn't small and very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white wall. Along a long wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on the wall opposite to a lavand sofa. Next to the sofa there is a computer table with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the right id the sofa there is a small fridge with ice creams and drinks in it. Also, in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because I have robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I like my room.
January 28, 2023
Hi, everybody. Can anybody help check my little essay? My dream. Everyone dreams of his or her ideal room and i'm not an exception. My dream room isn't small, but it's very comfortable. It has got two white windows and white walls. All along a wall of my room there is a LED lighting. There is a big black TV on the wall opposite to a lavand sofa. Next to the sofa there is a computer table with a lot of bookshelves above it. On the table there is a black laptop. On the right is the sofa. There is a small fridge with ice cream and drinks in it. Also, in the left corner I have a big wardrobe with beautiful clothes in it. My room is never in a mess, because i have a robot, which tidies my room when i sleep. I like my room.
January 28, 2023
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