The Tim じぁん!!!
It’s sunny today. My holiday is over and everything is back to usual. In the morning, my dad taught me English. The textbook was not quite about English but more about geography. I learned about the crust of the earth, plates shifting or crustal movements, the currents of magma or lava, and volcano eruptions. It crammed many big ideas at once and made me wonder if it was a real grade-two textbook. I think my dad had mixed something advanced here on the sly.
Jan 31, 2023 8:08 AM
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It’s sunny today. My holiday is over and everything is back to usual. In the morning, my dad taught me English. The textbook was not quite about English but more about geography. I learned about the Earth's crust, plates shifting or crustal movements, the currents of magma or lava, and volcanic eruptions. It taught me many big ideas at once and made me wonder if it was a real grade-two textbook. I think my dad had changed/switched something up in advanced here on the sly.
Hi there The Tim, wow this was very well said and written. Your structure was very good. I did make a few corrections and gave an option of word choice as well. I hope this helps you. Keep up the awesome work.
January 31, 2023
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It’s sunny today. My holiday is over and everything is back to usual (more usual to say back to normal) In the morning, my dad taught me English. The textbook was not quite about English but more about geography. I learned about the Earth’s crust, plates shifting or crustal movements, ( this is called plate tectonics) the currents of magma or lava, and volcanic eruptions. It crammed in many big ideas at once and made me wonder if it was a real grade-two textbook. I think my dad had mixed in something advanced here on the sly.
So are you still doing online classes for school? You can’t trust your dad!
January 31, 2023
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