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The given bar chart clearly shows the percentage of the citizen's expenditure during the Spring festival. Notably, new year's gifs account for 40%,the highest proportion among the four categories. Meanwhile, transportations and reunions to celebrate the Spring festival make up 20%,respectively. there are two fundamental factors involved in this phenomenon. The primary reason lies in economic growth. Owing to the Chinese economic development ,people's living standard has increased dramatically at a fast rate. As a result, more and more people tend to buy their friends and relatives presents to express their love and gratitude during the Spring festival. Moreover, In modern society with fierce competition, city-dwellers are under enormous pressure from professional and academic lives. Therefore ,they prefer to choose go back hometown to get together with their family members. to sum up, this tendency is overall positive and inspiring. The Spring festival is the most important and meaningful festival among the Chinese festivals. To relax ourselves and enhance the relationship between our friends and family members by spending money to send gifts ,eat together and go back hometown is reasonable .
Dec 7, 2025 2:26 PM
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The given bar chart clearly shows the percentage of the citizen's expenditure between (names all categories here) during the Spring festival. Notably, new year's gifts accounted for 40% of total expenditures, making it the highest proportion among the four categories studied. Meanwhile, transportations and reunions to celebrate the Spring festival made up for 20% of total expenditures. There are two fundamental factors involved in this phenomenon. The primary reason lies in economic growth. Owing to the Chinese economic development, people’s living standards have increased dramatically and at a fast rate. As a result, more and more people tend to buy their friends and relatives presents to express their love and gratitude during the Spring festival. Moreover, modern society is highly competitive and as a consequence, city-dwellers are under enormous pressure from either their professional or academic responsibilities. Therefore, they prefer to go back to their hometown to gather with their family members. To sum up, this tendency is overall positive and inspiring. The Spring festival is the most important and meaningful festival among all Chinese festivals. We deem reasonable to relax ourselves and strengthen our bonds with friends and family members by spending money to send gifts, eating together and going back to our hometown.
The word “respectively” is used to attach a number to a category, for example: “the amount of time tourists spent reading and visiting places respectively accounted for 20% and 35% of total time spent on activities” (20% of total time spent reading and 35% visiting places). Good piece of writing.
Dec 7, 2025 3:23 PM
The given (given isn’t necessary) pie chart shows the percentage of citizens’ expenditure in four different categories during Spring festival. Notably, new year's gifts account for 40%, the highest proportion among the four categories. Meanwhile, transportation, reunions to celebrate the Spring festival and other all make up 20%. There are two fundamental factors involved in this phenomenon. The primary reason lies in economic growth. Owing to Chinese economic development, people's living standards have increased dramatically. As a result, more and more people tend to buy their friends and relatives presents to express their love and gratitude during Spring festival. Moreover, In modern society with fierce competition, city-dwellers are under enormous pressure in their professional and academic lives. Therefore, they appreciate going back to their hometowns to get together with their family members. To sum up, this tendency is overall positive and inspiring. Spring festival is the most important and meaningful festival among the Chinese festivals. For people to relax and enhance their relationships with their friends and family members sending gifts, eating together and going back to their hometowns is a wonderful way to spend money.
Dec 7, 2025 2:35 PM
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