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Hi! I am Ashley. Today, I am honored to introduce to you a treasure in my heart - the Naval Battle Museum.
This is not only a place of beautiful scenery and rich history, but it also serves as a bridge connecting the past and the future, the gate of awakening land of heroes Inside the museum, a wealth of historical artifacts and precious documents are displayed, quietly narrating the grand history. Here, we can feel the scenes of our heroes Lin Zexu's anti-opium Reflecting on this humiliating history, where being backward meant being beaten, compels every Chinese person to strive for strength. Our hero Lin Zexu destroyed not only opium but also the corrupt thoughts of the Qing Dynasty,Indeed, thoughts
determine the path and wisdom , courage control our destiny. It is not only the pride of Dongguan but also the common wealth of all humanity. Let us be here to feel the power of history and thinking our future
Mar 22, 2024 10:53 AM
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Would you help me to make the speech simpler and natural? thanks Hi! I am
Ashley. Today, I am honored to introduce to you a treasure in my heart - the
Naval Battle Museum. This is not only a place of beautiful scenery and rich
history, but it also serves as a bridge connecting the past and the future, the
gate of awakening land of heroes Inside the museum, a wealth of historical
artifacts and precious documents are displayed, quietly narrating the grand
history. Here, we can feel the scenes of our heroes Lin Zexu's anti-opium
Reflecting on this humiliating history, where being backward (Backward??? Maybe you mean an eastern? Or an eastern person?) meant being beaten,
Compelling every Chinese person to strive for strength. Our hero Lin Zexu destroyed
not only opium but also the corrupt thoughts of the Qing Dynasty. Indeed,
thoughts determine the path and wisdom and courage controls our destiny. This is not
only the pride of Dongguan but also the common wealth of all humanity. Let us be
here to feel the power of history and thinking our future
Very nice and very deep, love it 😉
March 23, 2024
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Wendy
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English
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