wendy
I have been sick for 4 days, I got a flu and had all the symptoms I can name.high fever over 40℃,cough a lot, running nose, headache, muscle pains,etc...The sicknees made me crzay, I felt that I have just recoverd from Covid-19 for a short time and got sick again.Wearing masks over three years made our immune syetem weakly, almost all the people around me got this flu.Being sick has changed my mind which let me think about what the most important thing is in my life.Staying healthy is worh nothing when we are not sick, but at the moment that when we get sick and can't do anything ,we eventually understand that keeping healthy is the whole. So,I have made a decision that I will strengthen my immune syetem after getting well, ruinning it is easy,but just think about what you will feel when you are sick.
Mar 4, 2023 1:03 PM
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I have been sick for 4 days. I got the flu and had all the symptoms I can name; a high fever of over 40℃, coughing a lot, a runny nose, a headache, muscle pains, etc... The sickness is making me crazy. It feels like I have only just recovered from Covid-19, but I got sick again. Wearing masks for over three years made our immune systems weak. Almost all the people around me got this flu. Being sick has changed my way of thinking and lets me think about what the most important thing is in my life. Staying healthy is worth nothing when we are not sick, but from the moment that we get sick and can't do anything, we eventually understand that keeping healthy is everything. So, I have made the decision that I will strengthen my immune system after getting well. Ruining it is easy, but just think about how you will feel when you are sick.
Sorry to hear you caught the flu, Wendy. Despite being sick, you managed to write an excellent paragraph with some long sentences. Don't worry too much about the typos, but instead have a look into articles if you want to keep improving your grammar. Well done!
March 4, 2023
I have been sick for 4 days, I got a flu and had all the symptoms I can name.high fever over 40℃,cough a lot, running nose, headache, muscle pains,etc...The sickness made me go crazy, I felt like I have just recovered from Covid-19 for a short time and got sick again.Wearing masks over three years made our immune system weaker , almost all the people around me got this flu.Being sick has changed my mind which let me think about what are the most important thing is in my life.Staying healthy is worth nothing when we are not sick, but at the moment when we get sick and can't do anything ,we eventually understand that staying healthy is most important . So,I have made a decision that I will strengthen my immune system after getting well, ruining it is easy,but just think about what you will feel when you are sick.
Staying healthy is worth nothing when we are not sick, this phrase is quite confusing
March 4, 2023
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