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I went to the hair salon today to get my hair cut. I always have the same hairstylist, and we always have fun conversations. I’m happy when my hair looks nice, but I also really enjoy chatting with my hairstylist. It’s something I look forward to every two months.
Jul 16, 2025 1:50 PM
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I went to the hair salon today to get my hair cut. I always have the same hairstylist, and we always have fun conversations. I’m happy when my hair looks nice, but I also really enjoy chatting with my hairstylist. It’s something I look forward to every two months. Revised: I went to the hair salon today to get a haircut. I always go to the same hairstylist, and we always have fun conversations. I feel happy when my hair looks nice, but what I enjoy just as much is chatting with my hairstylist. It’s something I always look forward to every two months.
1. “to get my hair cut” → “to get a haircut” “Get a haircut” is more natural and commonly used in everyday English. Example: “I need to get a haircut” is more typical than “get my hair cut,” though both are grammatically correct. 2. “I always have the same hairstylist” → “I always go to the same hairstylist” This change emphasizes that you choose to visit the same person, which sounds more intentional and natural in this context. 3. “I’m happy” → “I feel happy” “I feel happy” fits better when talking about a specific situation or reaction to something (like your hair looking nice). 4. “but I also really enjoy chatting…” → “but what I enjoy just as much is chatting…” This improves sentence variety and adds a balanced comparison, showing that chatting is equally enjoyable. 5. “It’s something I always” The addition of always is for emphasis on the regular habit
Jul 16, 2025 2:13 PM
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