Today, I went to school and attended all of my classes. After school, I found out that my computer was broken. The screen was not working properly, so I decided to take it to a repair shop. I hope it can be fixed soon because I use it for studying and other important things. After that, I went home and relaxed. It was a busy and stressful day, but I hope everything will be okay.
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Today, I went to school and attended all of my classes. After school, I found out that my computer was broken. The screen was not working properly, so I decided to take it to a repair shop. I hope it can be fixed soon because I use it for studying and other important tasks. After that, I went home and relaxed. It was a busy and stressful day, but I hope everything will be okay.
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Today, I went to school and attended all of my classes. After school, I found out that my computer was broken. The screen was not working properly, so I decided to take it to a repair shop. I hope it can be fixed soon because I use it for studying and other important things. After that, I went home and relaxed. It was a busy and stressful day, but I hope everything will be okay.
Great work. We'd probably say that your computer 'isn't working' rather than 'broken'. 'Broken' does make sense, but it rather implies a physical rather than software problem, that it's smashed, for instance.
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