Hi! I had dinner with my friends from my part time job. We went to a ramen shop. I ate a miso ramen. My favorite food is a ramen, so I usually go to ramen shop once a week. Also my friend works ramen

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Hi! I had dinner with my friends from my part time job. We went to a ramen shop. I ate a miso ramen. My favorite food is a ramen, so I usually go to ramen shop once a week. Also my friend works ramen shop. I want to go to there!

Apr 20, 2025 9:08 AM

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Hi! I had dinner with my friends from my part-time job. We went to a ramen shop, and I had miso ramen. My favorite food is ramen, so I usually go to a ramen shop once a week. Also, my friend works at a ramen shop. I want to go there!

Hi みほこ! It sounds like you had a great dinner with your friends! I love how you shared your passion for ramen and your weekly visits to ramen shops. You also did well mentioning your friend's job, which adds a nice personal touch. For improvement, try to use more varied vocabulary to make your writing even more interesting. Keep enjoying your ramen adventures!

April 20, 2025

Hi! I had dinner with my work colleagues. We went to a ramen shop. I ate a miso ramen. My favorite food is ramen, so I usually go to a ramen shop once a week. One of my friends also works at a ramen shop and I'd like to go there and pay him/her a visit.

April 20, 2025

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