Could you correct my story?
1 month before the trek came Canada, my second elder sister and I went to a shop at branch near our house to bought drug and beauty care to use in Canada because the price cheaper and usually has discount. The first thing I saw when we stood in front of the shop was stacks of promotion goods on the tables that disheveled but not ugly and looked like there were many products which attracted me to buy them, so I put a lot of them in my basket. After that I went in the shop, I saw the walkthroughs between each shelf enough only for 2 people stand together and the shelf has head high that it was good for me because it was privacy. But when I want to ask something about the product from the staff, I found they were talking together and ignored customers. Even though when I repeated the question, they answered, but tried to sell only one of them that gave market share to them, so I felt dissatisfied. After that, I went to pay but my sister forgot to bring membership card then the cashier tried to help by asking her phone number instead. I was very grateful because it caused me to get a 10% discount.