Hello. I am too hot today to go out. In addition to this, it is crowded in the train. I weat…
Jun 10, 2021 11:20 PM
Corrections · 2
Hello. It's too hot today to go out. Also, the trains are crowded. What you wrote was fine and understandable. But to sound more natural, we would say "It's hot". It = weather. "in addition to this" sounds more academic and used in speeches and essays more. When talking we usually just say "Also" or "And".
June 11, 2021
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