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Hello, everyone! I will introduce my hometown. There is a delicious egg shop in my howetown. I especially love pudding at that shop. Therefore, There is a big festival in my hometown. It is held every August. Many people are dancing. Also, there are yakisoba shops, freezing pineapple shops and so on. The food in everything shops are delicious🥰 I want to go to the festival this year. If I made any mistakes, please correct them.
Jun 11, 2021 4:55 AM
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Hello, everyone! I will introduce my hometown to you. There is a delicious egg shop in my hometown. I especially love pudding at that shop. There is a big festival in my hometown. It is held every August. Many people dance during the festival. Also, there are yakisoba shops, frozen pineapple shops and so on. The food in the shops are delicious🥰 I want to go to the festival this year. If I made any mistakes, please correct them.
Me too! Where is your hometown, if I may ask?
June 11, 2021
Hello, everyone! I will introduce my hometown. There is a delicious egg shop in my hometown. I especially love the pudding sold at that shop. There is a big festival in my hometown too. It is held every August. During the festivities many people are dancing. There are yakisoba shops, freezing pineapple shops and so on as well. The foods (or: dishes) in all the shops are delicious🥰 I want to go to the festival this year. If I made any mistakes, please correct them.
Nice work! I would like to know what an "egg shop" is? Do they sell only eggs or egg related products/dishes? 卵屋は何ですか。あそこでは卵で作った料理だけを売られていますか。卵だけを売られていますか。
June 11, 2021
Hello, everyone! I will introduce my hometown. There is a delicious egg shop in my hometown. I especially love pudding from that shop. There is a big festival in my hometown. It is held every August. Many people dance. Also, there are yakisoba shops, [freezing pineapple shops]* and so on. The food in every kind of shop is delicious🥰 I want to go to the festival this year. If I made any mistakes, please correct them. * What is a "freezing pineapple shop"?
All of those shops sound so wonderful!
June 11, 2021
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