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in the clear water of the round pond, the lotus flowers are straightening up in the breeze.
Jul 15, 2025 8:10 AM
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In the clear water of the round pond, the lotus flowers are rising up in the breeze.
Your writing is really beautiful. It paints such a calm, clear picture.
In English, we usually say things like “blooming”, “swaying in the breeze” or “standing tall” when we talk about flowers.
You’ve got a lovely way of expressing yourself. Keep writing!
Jul 15, 2025 8:54 AM
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李歌川
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English
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