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The Tim じぁん!!!
It was a beautiful day today. Since it was the last day of our trip here, we spent the day shopping for souvenirs. I even visited an art exhibition when we were strolling around the malls and boutiques at city center. My dad bought a new pair of shoes. I bought a lot of gadgets, especially egg twisters. My mom, being my mom, bought a bagful of condiments like Shichimi. It's a bit strange to buy condiments while traveling, but she's always unique. Overall, we're all satisfied with our purchases and had an amazing trip.
Oct 26, 2024 9:06 AM
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It has been a beautiful day today. As it was the last day of our trip here, we spent it shopping for souvenirs. I even visited an art exhibition while we were strolling around the malls and boutiques in the city center. My dad bought a new pair of shoes. I bought a lot of gadgets, especially egg twisters. My mom, being my mom, bought a bagful of condiments like Shichimi. It's maybe a bit strange to buy condiments while traveling, but she's always unique. Overall, we're all satisfied with our purchases and had an amazing trip.
Great :) egg twisters = egg whisks? You could also use the construction 'She's nothing if not unique.'
October 26, 2024
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It was a beautiful day today. Since it was the last day of our trip here, we
spent the day shopping for souvenirs. I even visited an art exhibition when we
were strolling around the malls and boutiques in the city center. My dad bought a
new pair of shoes. I bought a lot of gadgets, especially egg twisters. My mom,
being my mom, bought a bagful of condiments like Shichimi. It's a bit strange to
buy condiments while traveling, but she's always unique. Overall, we're all
satisfied with our purchases and had an amazing trip.
Safe flight home!
October 27, 2024
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The Tim じぁん!!!
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English
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