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Do you find this dialogue grammatically correct and natural enough?
A: You and your friends treated me so badly the previous day. I couldn't close my eyes because the whole incident took away the sleep off me. It was like the whole incident turned into a woodpecker in my mind and was drilling my head.
B: I'm sorry for the bottom of my heart. I can assure you such a thing won't happen to you again.
A: It's okay. But your friends didn't apologize like you did. They should have done that by now. Shouldn't they have been as conscientious as you and own up to their mistakes?
B: How can I say what they need to do? I have done my part. It's their will if they apologize to you or not. Why are you entangling myself with their matters? Why would I take the burden of the whole blame on me?
A: You got me wrong. Actually I wanted to know the reason behind their not being apologetic. You are their close friends so I thought you might know the answer. You got furious unnecessarily and jumped to the conclusion that I put the whole blame on you. Actually, I didn't mean that. It's your irrational thinking.
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Jan 11, 2023 12:30 PM
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Do you find this dialogue grammatically correct and natural enough?
A: You and your friends treated me so badly the previous day. I couldn't close my eyes because the whole incident shook me enough to prevent me from sleeping. It was like the mere thought of that incident acted as a woodpecker drilling my head.
B: I'm sorry from the bottom of my heart. I can assure you such a thing won't happen again.
A: It's okay. But your friends haven't apologize as you did. They should have done so by now. Shouldn't they have been as conscientious as you and own their mistakes / own up to being so rude towards me?
B: How could I talk on their behalf? I have done my part. It's up to them if they want to apologize or not. Why would I have to take the blame for the whole team?
A: You got me wrong. I just wanted to know why they hadn't apologized yet. You are their close friend so I thought you might know the answer. You unnecessarily got furious and jumped to the conclusion that I was putting the whole blame on you but that's not what I meant. I think you overreacted.
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January 11, 2023
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Farhana Qureishi
Language Skills
Bengali, English
Learning Language
English
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