Today, I want to talk about my birthday. This month I will become 20 years old! I can’t wait the day because I’m going to go to Tokyo Disneyland with my friends on my birthday. Moreover, we will stay

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Today, I want to talk about my birthday. This month I will become 20 years old! I can’t wait the day because I’m going to go to Tokyo Disneyland with my friends on my birthday. Moreover, we will stay in the Disney Hotel one night! Then I already reserved some restaurants. I am so excited. If I become 20 years old, I want to try drinking alcohol in the Disneyland. For example, wine and cocktail and so on. Probably, I think that I can't drink much, because my mother can't drink alcohol. I am looking forward to come the day!

Oct 14, 2021 7:37 AM

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Today, I want to talk about my birthday. This month I will turn 20 years old! I can’t wait for the day because I’m going to go to Tokyo Disneyland with my friends. Moreover, we will stay at Disney Hotel for one night! I have already made reservations at some restaurants. I am so excited. When I become 20 years old, I want to try out alcohol at Disneyland, like wine, cocktails and so on. I don't think that I will drink much, because my mother doesn't drink alcohol. I am looking forward to the day!

Good. Enjoy your day!

October 18, 2021

Today, I want to talk about my birthday. This month I will turned 20 years old! I can’t wait because I’m going to go to Tokyo Disneyland with my friends on my birthday. Moreover, we will stay in the Disney Hotel for one night! Then, I have already made reservations for some restaurants and I am so excited about it. When I turned 20 years old, I want to try drinking alcohol in the Disneyland. For example, wine and cocktail and so on. Probably I think that I can't drink much, because my mother can't drink alcohol. I am looking forward for that day to come!

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October 18, 2021

Today, I want to talk about my birthday. This month I will become 20 years old! I can’t wait because I’m going to go to Tokyo Disneyland with my friends on my birthday. Moreover, we will stay in the Disney Hotel for one night! I have already made reservations at some restaurants. I am so excited. When I become 20 years old, I want to try drinking alcohol at Disneyland. For example, wine and cocktail and so on. Probably, I think that I can't drink much, because my mother can't drink alcohol. I am looking forward to the day!

October 18, 2021