I'm sick today and my voice changed. Sang this song, trying my new voice.
Well, it's helpful if you could list the pronunciation problems. I'm always looking forward to improving myself.
I listened again as you got me curious. I wouldn't say there were many pronunciation problems; some yes, many? No. In many English songs, I cannot make out what the singers are singing. How many songs in English do not have perfect pronunciation? A lot.
I think much of the pronunciation here follows the original song. Whether you can extrapolate that to this person having many problems with pronunciation as you imply is a bit far.
You have some skill, and could become a good singer. But you were out of tune more than once, and you had many pronunciation problems.
@Learner SC - I see you've worded your post in such a way that even if I listed the pronunciation problems, of which there are many, you would discount them as being artistic license or something. Well done!
I've never heard this song before. I could not understand what you were saying in the beginning. Your pronunciation was better in the middle and end. Not bad, but you need to work on your pronunciation.