Hilin Roman
Help me, please!Are there any grammar mistakes in these sentences? I work as a CNC operator at a factory. I operate a CNC laser cutting  machine. I am responsible for cutting and engraving of metal. I also oversee the work of the machine keeping it on track and fixing it when it break. Before I start cutting or engraving of metal I download a program. Then I load the raw materials into the hopper and begin the procces. When the piece is complete  I pull it out of the machine and check it carefully to make sure it is been handled just perfectly. Throughout my workday, i listen for humming, shrieking, or other strange noises from my machine. These sounds could indicate that a screw is coming loose or the equipment is simply too hot and needs a  break. If something goes terribly wrong, i’ll see a coded help signal pop up on the display screen, and i’ll know what to do to fix the problem and get the machine back up and running
May 1, 2017 4:40 PM
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These sounds could indicate that a screw something is coming loose or the equipment is simply too hot and needs a  break to cool down If something goes terribly wrong, I’ll see a coded help signal pop up on the display screen, and I’ll know what to do to fix the problem and get the machine back up and running.
May 1, 2017
I work as a CNC operator at a factory. I operate a CNC laser cutting  machine. I am responsible for cutting and engraving of metal. I also oversee the work of the machine, keeping it on track and fixing it when if it breaks down. Before I start cutting or engraving of the metal, I download a program. Then I load the raw materials into the hopper and begin the proccess. When the piece is complete  I pull take it out of the machine and check it carefully to make sure it is been handled just perfectly produced correctly. Throughout my workday, i I listen for humming, shrieking, or other strange unusual noises from my machine. 
May 1, 2017

You should probably do these things in the notebook, but I can help you. 

I work as a CNC operator at a factory. I operate a CNC laser cutting machine. I am responsible for cutting and engraving of metal. I also oversee the work of the machine and keeping it on track and fixing it if when it breaks. Before I start cutting or engraving of metal, I download a program. Then I load the raw materials into the hopper and begin the procces. When the piece is complete, I pull it out of the machine, and check it carefully to make sure it is being handled just perfectly. Throughout my workday, I listen for humming, shrieking, or other strange noises from my machine. These sounds could indicate that a screw is coming loose or the equipment is simply too hot and needs a  break. If something goes terribly wrong, i’ll see a coded help signal pop up on the display screen, and I’ll know what to do how to fix the problem and get the machine back up and running.

May 1, 2017
thank you all very much!!!
May 2, 2017

Thanks a lot!!


May 1, 2017
Hilin Roman
Language Skills
English, Russian, Ukrainian
Learning Language
English