(Long) Chinese sentences. Please help me correct these.

1. 我们致力于为每个客户取得成功和进步,作为一个充满活力的团队工作, 来让事情变得简单直接。

English: We strive for success and progress for each client, working as a dynamic and objective team that keeps things simple and direct.

2. 我们在亚太市场取得了广泛的成就, 就是根据与关键市场数据的长期专业关系,为开创更多的产品和品牌的商业机会,以及为这些复杂但利润丰厚的市场创造和实施有效的商业模式。

English: We have a wide range of achievements in the Asia-Pacific markets, which is based on longstanding professional relationships with key in-market figures, to pioneering commercial opportunities for brands and products, as well as generating and implementing effective business models for diversification into these complex but lucrative markets. 

May 29, 2018 11:16 AM
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June 2, 2018
Anyone? :-) 
May 30, 2018