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Easter is one of important holiday in my country, and luckily I got couple days off from office. I had decided to visit my relatives, therefore I went to the western part of Georgia, my country – where they are living.<o:p></o:p>

At first, I went to the city where my older brother lives with his wife and lovely daughter. The distance from where I am living currently and the place they are staying is quite far, it took approximately four hours to reach the place. <o:p></o:p>

Finally, when later I met them, I was extremely happy to meet my brother’s family because I haven’t seen them for quite long time. The day after, we had visited our grandmother. Our grandmother lives alone in a beautiful village and I haven’t got chance to visit her since last year. On those days in the village, I really spent amazing time with my family. <o:p></o:p>

For me personally, I like village so much and I wish that I could stay for couple weeks even months there. Unfortunately I couldn’t do that because I only had few days off. Then, right now I am sitting on the bus heading back to my city. I delight to see the view from window, while sometimes I read my book – the one I found on village. I am hoping that I will finish reading as the trip will take around six hours.<o:p></o:p>


May 1, 2019 3:50 PM
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May 1, 2019