Second, people called Da Nang is the city of light. In the evening, Da nang is lightened up by many road lamps with different colours (ah, English spelling!). And it is also known for many famous bridges like the Han bridge, Thuan Phuoc bridge and the newest bridge is the Dragon bridge that breaths fire every weekend. The final hot pot in Da Nang that I want to introduce is Linh Ung Pagoda located on Son Tra Island with a big Quan Am statue. If you want to get good fortune something lucky (to get lucky is to meet a female), come there and tell the statue, then lucky things will come to you.

Also your word order is 'a little strange', but not really incorrect. An Englishman would just make different sentences. It's difficult to explain.

Hey actually for corrections we have a separate section, notebook..

An interesting city

My interesting city is Da Nang. It is the best place where I want to travel. First, The weather in Da Nang is very comfortable, especially in the summer. When you come here from April to August, you can go to the beach and enjoy all activities in there. Some beachs that I want to recommend to you are Pham Van Dong's beach and Nguyen Sinh Sac's beach. Da Nang's cuisine is very special and delicious. It's not too expensive and very fresh. You should try Quang noodles and Nam O raw fish salad.

Thanks M_rk_s. I'm so happy when you correct my paragraph. I've just begun learning Toefl-ibt. In my paragraph, 'a little strange word' is the name of food, lanscape, bridge.... Thank you again! I'll try my best!
My name is Nghia and I come from Viet Nam. Nice to meet you!