Jessica: - Hello dear!
Pattie: - Howdy,friend!
Jessica: - Honey,HOW OFTEN do you buy new clothes in the shopping?
Pattie: - Well,I'll usually go at 5:00 p.m .
Jessica: - Why?
Pattie: - Cause ' I got many promotion.Don't you think have fun?
Jessica: - No.
Pattie: - No? Why?
Jessica: - Because there's people a lot on that place.I'd(I had) phobia.
Pattie: - So...alright. I see you!
Jessica: - Bye!
In the dialog that I created, some of the girls loved going to the mall shopping for fun thought. While the other girl odiava.Não for shopping, but for having many people in that place.
That is a good composition. You used "there is" and "there are" and "how often" quite well.
One sentence that needed fuller expression was this one:
"Cause ' I got many promotion. Don't you think have fun?"
It might be written this way for more accuracy. "Because I got ("a" or "my") promotion.
"Don't you want to have fun?" or "Aren't you thinking about having some fun?"
Phobia is also a technical term. The more common term about discomfort in a crowed would be "fear". So if we say; "There's a lot of people in that place!" ...we would usually be referring to a fear.
We would use PHOBIA if a person had been to a Psychiatrist and received an actual diagnosis for a PHOBIA ("fear"). It is more normal for people generally to refer to their "fear" of a large crowd or a general discomfort.
Good writing for a dialogue Elizete.
what is the funny thing？thank you！
sorry, i don,t got it. would you please give any explain to me？