Describe your first mobile phone you bought
-when you got it
-how you got it
-what you used it for
And explain how it affect and change your life
Let me describe about the very first mobile phone I bought and that was my Samsung AAA model. It was the latest model at that time so I was so eager to buy one.
I got this phone several years ago in a Samsung shop near my area. In fact, it was my birthday gift from my parents. It costed me around 300 dollars to purchase that phone since it was a brand new one. My parents decided to buy me one so that they can reach me in times of emergency. Unfortunately, I tried to overuse it and I ended up using it to text my classmates and friends. I spent most of my time calling and chatting with all of them even on study time. As a result, I didn't use much of my time wisely. Later on my grades fell down without me noticing it. Supposedly, this phone should gave me more advantages because I can reach people easily anytime I want to and the same thing for them. But more than that, it brought some negative effects as well. My study habits and academic standing suffered a lot since I had this phone. So that was my Samsung AAA model, the very first mobile phone I ever had.
∙ Do you like birthday celebrations?
-Generally, like most people, I like birthday celebrations because it's the best time to celebrate with good foods, drinks, long hours of chatting and fun as well.
Are there any grammatical errors ? or Can you correct to be naturally?
