Hi!! I have been practicing writing e-mail, essays and so on in English. But the problem here is that I dont know my words are used correctly or not and my expression is good enough for readers to understand :( . So could you please kindly read this and check for me? I would appreciate it very much :)))

Here is the sales letter:

Dear Mrs. Wise,

I am very pleased to represent the Al – Munir Hotel and Spa Group to express our deep gratitude for your generous support over the past few years. It is my honor to inform you that you are one of a few select customers we have chosen to be received some special offers.

First of all, we are more than delighted to provide you the diamond member card, which is the highest level of our card system. This card will provide you golden opportunities for advancement in accessing our premium services. For details, you will be directly discounted 5% in every bill payment of our restaurant, spa and gym chain. Moreover, you can use our newly innovative facilities without charge for the first two weeks when they are available.

Acknowledging from your profile in our website, we would like to send you the best wishes for your upcoming birthday. In addition, we to give you a voucher worth $500 for using our amenities.

Your card and voucher will be given at the receptionist desk. If you have any question, I am pleased to answer it via e-mail or phone number (+081*****).

Again, thank you for giving our business a chance to serve you. We look forward to building ongoing relationship with you in the future.

Yours sincerely,
Huong

Thank you so much :)