I'm a seventeen year-old boy how lives in France i would love to learn some English in order to improuve my langages.<em>
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Correction

I'm a seventeen year-old boy who lives in France. I would love to learn some English, so that I can improve my English Language understanding.

I'm a seventeen-year-old <em>("17-year-old" is also correct)</em> boy who lives in France. I would love to learn some English in order to improve my language skills. <em>(or "in order to improve my fluency.")

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thanks for your correction hum i'm looking for someone like you how can teach me or just speak and give me some "Conseilles" 

ps: The only one mistake that i've made is "Improve" because i know that the meaning of "qui" in English is Who as the "Doctor Who" ^_^ lol 

Firstly I will correct for you:

I'm a seventeen years-old boy who lives in France and I would love to learn some English in order to improve my language.

Let's start it. There are lots of members here trying to learn English, too!