Could you help correct my grammatical mistakes in my two sentences below?

1. Such situation as that suggests that most of Chinese companies still maintain the low or poor technology , producing the inferior product, with graduated students with possession of high technology having nothing or no way to exert their talents.

2. You are just like a kitten to be tantalized by a boy with a fish into his palm who is wobbling it to and fro irregularly, now being done by such middle aged beautiful woman.

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Could you help correct my grammatical mistakes in my two sentences below?

1.  Such situation as that suggests that most of Chinese companies still maintain the low or poor technology , producing the inferior product, with graduated students with possession of high technology having nothing or no way to exert their talents.

2. You are just like a kitten to be tantalized by a boy with a fish into his palm who is wobbling it to and fro irregularly, now being done by such middle aged beautiful woman.

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There's too much to fix. It would result in starting over.

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#2: This is not the same, but we like to say:

"She's has you wrapped around her little finger."

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This sort of situation suggests that most Chinese companies still use low grade technology to produce inferior products while ignoring the talents of graduates who know about high technology.

She is tantalising you like a boy with a fish teasing a kitten.

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