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Sara
It's snowing outside. I used to like snow so much, because after snow, the world is so pure and beautiful. Also, because I love skiing, I really love winter.
But since I realized that winter is so cruel to these homeless creatures, especially puppies and kittens, my feelings changed. The horrible temperature will make them very difficult to survive.💔I'm so sorry that you don't have a home in such a big world.😣
I met this this little puppy a few days ago. When I met her, she was freezing and shivering. I don have the plan of having a dog because I know dogs would make my life so different. It's like a kid, naughty, sometimes could make a mess, I have to walk with it because dogs need to be outside a lot. Buy I couldn't just walk away. So I adopted her.My house is little, but it's warm.
Jan 20, 2024 2:02 AM
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It's snowing outside. I used to like snow so much, because after snow, the world is (looks?) so pure and beautiful. Also, because I love skiing, I really love winter.
But since I realized that winter is so cruel to homeless creatures, especially puppies and kittens, my feelings changed. The horrible temperature will make it very difficult for them to survive.💔I'm so sorry that you don't have a home in such a big world.😣
I met this little puppy a few days ago. When I met her, she was freezing and shivering. I’m planning on having a dog because I know a dog would make my life so different / a dog would drastically change my life. It's like a kid: it can be naughty sometimes and make a mess and I also have to regularly walk it because dogs need to be outside a lot. But I couldn't just walk away, so I adopted her. My house is little, but it's warm.
You can use “these” only after you have specified what you are talking about, for example: “I like dogs, these animals are good companions.” Winter can be cruel for any creatures, animals and humans alike as soon as they don’t have a roof above their head. I hope your little companion will be fine.
January 20, 2024
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Sara
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, French
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English
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