Hi everyone! Are these correct? ⬇️

1.The boy left, a toy in hand.

2.The teacher reads the paragraph loudly, students following.

3.The vacation starts, the exam finished.

4.The boy was knocked over, blood stream down head.

5.We fell asleep, all the lights on.

Thank you so much!

Question

Hi everyone!￼ Are these correct? ⬇️

1.The boy left, a toy in hand.

2.The teacher reads the paragraph loudly, students following.

3.The vacation starts, the exam finished.

4.The boy was knocked over, blood stream down head.

5.We fell asleep, all the lights on.

Thank you so much!

Answer

1.The boy left, a toy in hand. ok

2.The teacher reads the paragraph loudly, students following. ok

3. The exams finished, the vacation starts.

4.The boy was knocked over, blood streamING down head.

5.We fell asleep, all the lights on. ok

Answer

Hi everyone!￼ Are these correct? ⬇️

1.The boy left, (with) a toy in hand.

2.The teacher is reading the paragraph loudly, the students are following.

3.The vacation starts (started after) the exam (had) finished.

4.The boy was knocked over, blood (was) streaming down his head.

5.We fell asleep,(with) all the lights on.

Thank you so much!

While they are sort of ok, they would be much more normal sentences with the words in () and no commas.