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Writing Topics:Playing computer games is a waste of time, child should not be able to play them. With the development of technology, computers become more and more cheaper. There is no doubt that many families have more than one computer nowadays. However, the rapid development of computer also gives rise to another question- Should children be permitted to play computer games? In my opinion, playing computer games is necessary for the growth of children. Meanwhile, it's also significant to control the time children play within a reasonable range. In the first place, playing computer games is essential for children to maintain his or her social interaction. For example, imagine a situation that almost every friend of children will play a popular computer games and they talk about the games all day, such as heroes, skills and equipments etc. Meanwhile, it's really difficult for the children to join with his or her friends if he or she doesn't play the same game. Lacking the same topics and interests, children will definitely find that he is isolated, which may lead to some serious results on the growth of the children. In addition, children need seek a good way to relieve the pressure from study. No one can deny that a efficient study lies not only in the concentration during the study hour but also in the way to give himself or herself a good relax. For instance, one way to memorize a word is to read the word 100 times; on the other hand, we can also just read the word 1 time a day and keep this process during 100 days. Which methods are more effective? I guess everyone will agree the latter one. Although playing computer games will do some harm to the children or children are addicted to the games, it can be fixed by limiting the duration each time the kids play. Young kids are always lack of self-discipline and parents should take the responsibility. What's more, the more you educate kids, the more understanding the kids will get. It's actually the way you teach kids to control the time and has nothing to do with the games themselves. In conclusion, considered the good points it brings, playing computer games has overall advantages and we should let children play games. -------- BTW: anyone can give me a good suggestion about the last paragraph???I'm not satisfied with this one. This passages are supposed to write within 30 minutes
Sep 22, 2011 8:45 AM
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Writing Topics:Playing computer games is a waste of time, children should not be able to play them.


With the development of technology, computers have become more and more cheaper and cheaper. There is no doubt that many families have more than one computer nowadays. However, the such rapid development of computer also gives rise to another question- Should children be permitted to play computer games? In my opinion, playing computer games is necessary for the growth of children. Meanwhile, it's also significant At the same time, it is important to control restrict the time that children can play within to a reasonable period range.

In the first place, Since playing computer games is essential for children to maintain his or her social interaction. For example, imagine a situation that almost every friend of children will play a popular computer games and they talk about the games all day, prevalent among children, they share a common interest where they can form social bonds by discussing things such as heroes, skills and levels, different types of equipments etc. Meanwhile, it's really difficult for the children to join with his or her friends if he or she doesn't play the same game. Lacking the same topics and interests, children will definitely find that he is isolated, which may lead to some serious results on the growth of the children. Like adults, when there is no common interest, friendships will never form.

In addition, Children need seek a good to have interesting outlets way to relieve the pressure from study. No one can deny this.  After all, adults also complain that they don't have enough vacation time to relax from their daily work grind! that a efficient study lies not only in the concentration during the study hour but also in the way to give himself or herself a good relax. For instance, one way to memorize a word is to read the word 100 times; on the other hand, we can also just read the word 1 time a day and keep this process during 100 days. Which methods are more effective? I guess everyone will agree the latter one. 1

Although Playing computer games will do some harm to the children or children are addicted to the games, it can be fixed by limiting the duration each time the kids play. like all good things in life, if done in excess is never a good thing.  This is easily fixed when parents limit the playing time.  It is the responsibility of the parents to do so as children lack self discipline.

Young kids are always Children lack of self-discipline and parents should take the responsibility. What's more, The crux here is to the more you educate the little darlings in a way they can understand easilykids, the more understanding the kids will get. It's actually the way you teach kids to control the time and has nothing to do with the games themselves. Not only this, children will be able to learn how to manage their time and exercise self discipline.  What a wonderful way to instill such values in them!  Also parents ought not to forget that they were kids once; perhaps in different circumstances but nevertheless the same principle in they were educated by their parents.

In conclusion, considered the good points it brings, playing computer games has overall advantages and we should let children play computer games but at a measured rate.

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BTW: Can anyone can give me a good better suggestion to end the essay? about the last paragraph???I'm not satisfied with this one. This passages are supposed to be write written within 30 minutes

The current crop of F15 jet fighter pilots were brought up in the age of arcade video games!  Their parents were considering banning or limiting access to kids.  People never change and the generation war goes on.

September 22, 2011
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