Women yiqi qu huaryuan duimian de ta de xueyuan.
Ran hou, wo men jiu yi qi dao ta de xue yuan qu le. Ta de xue yuan jiu zai dui mian.
然后，我们就一起到她的学院去了。她的学院就在花园对面。
Wo de hao pengyou. Part 2
我的好朋友
Wanshang Lena gen dai wo qu ta de jia.
晚上列娜带我去她的家。 ("gen" means follow,and "dai" means bring.here "dai" might be better according to your meaning)
Ta gei wo kankan le tamen de xin fangzi.
她给我看了他们的新房子。
You 4 ge fangjian. ( She showed me her new house ).
有四个房间，
Ta de woshi zai keting duimian. Woshi hen da.
她的卧室在客厅对面，卧室很大。
Chuanghu pangbian you 1 zhan chuang.
窗户旁边有一盏灯。
Fangjian libian you hen duo piaoliang de zhaopian.
房间里边有很多漂亮的照片。
Lena de woshi shi hen ganjing.
列娜的卧室很干净。
Lena you shihou gen ta nanpengyou qu juchang.
列娜有时候跟她男朋友去剧场。
Tamen dou xihuan ting xiandai yinyue.
他们都喜欢听现代音乐。
Ta gei wo xiandai yinyue de guangpan.
她给我现代音乐的光盘。
Wo renshi ta de nanpengyou. Ta jiao Andelie.
我认识她的男朋友，他叫安德烈。
Women yiqi qu huaryuan duimian de ta de xueyuan.
我们一起去花园对面的她的学院。(-r is used only for monosyllables,it "hua" was a part of a multi-syllable words like "huayuan",it cannot be pronunced as "huar")
Women zai na li kan shu. Lena he Andelie bangzhu wo xuexi hanyu. ( they help me learn chinese)
我们在那里看书，列娜和安德烈帮助我学习汉语。
Wo de hao peng you. Part 2
Wan shang Lena dai（bring） wo qu ta de jia. Ta gei wo kan le ta men de xin fang zi. You 4 ge fang jian. ( She showed me her new house ). Ta de wo shi zai ke ting dui mian. Wo shi hen da. Chuang hu pang bian you 1 zhan chuang（ 1 zhang chuang）. Fang jian l ibian you hen duo piao liang de zhao pian.Lena de wo shi shi fei chang gan jing.
Lena you shi hou xi huan gen ta nan peng you qu
ju chang. Ta men dou xi huan ting xian dai yin yue. Ta gei wo xian dai yin yue de guang pan. Wo ren shi ta de nan peng you. Ta jiao Andelie. Wo men yi qi qu hua yuan dui mian de ta de xue yuan. Wo men zai na li kan shu. Lena he Andelie bang zhu wo xue xi han yu. ( they help me learn chinese)
qing zhu yi，mei ge pin yin zhi jian ying gai kong ge，yin wei yi ge pin yin dai biao yi ge han zi，lian zai yi qi rong yi yin qi qi yi（if put them together ，people will misunderstand the meaning.)
zong ti hen hao, ru guo neng xie cheng han zi jiu geng hao le !
jia you !
如果能写成汉字就更好了！
