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FIRST paragraph about advantages of modern medicine The modern medicine has two main advantages. Firstly, the modern medicine can prevent incurable diseases. If doctors find a sickness very early, they can suspend a spread of illness. Then doctors give suitable medicines to patients which help to recover from a disease. In the world there are a great amount of remedy which is given to treat for a specific sickness. For example, a person falls ill with a influenza, he must take an aspirine. Then a patient will get over. The second advantage is that new modern equipments releave doctors’ job. The mechanism helps doctors is going to correct way. For instance, a pacient comes down with an illness and doctors can not identify a disease. At that point they do variety of examinations such as X-ray or blood test. Checking up a human body doctors know what a treatment to apply. In conclusion, the modern medicine is important for living because available medicine quicken a cure of sickness and a modern technology help to find a disease faster.
Feb 7, 2013 11:20 PM
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FIRST paragraph about advantages of modern medicine

The Modern medicine has two main advantages. First, the modern medicine can prevent incurable diseases. If doctors find a sickness very early, they can suspend stop the a spread of illness. Then doctors can give suitable medicines to patients which to help to them recover from a disease. In the world there are a great amount of remedies which is are used given to treat for a specific sicknesses. For example, a person falls ill with a influenza, he must take an aspirine. Then a patient will recover get over. The second advantage is that new modern equipment releave helps the doctors’ job. The equipment mechanism helps doctors go in the right direction is going to correct way. For instance, a pacient comes down with an illness and doctors cannot identify the a disease. At that point they do variety of examinations tests such as X-rays or blood tests. After evaluating the results, Checking up a human body the doctors know what a treatment to apply. In conclusion, the modern medicine is important for living because available medicine quickens [speeds up] a the cure of the sickness and a modern technology helps to find a disease faster.

 

Good job, interesting topic

Brian

February 8, 2013
Aspirin alone won't help someone recover from influenza.
February 9, 2013
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