FIRST paragraph about advantages of modern medicine
The Modern medicine has two main advantages. First, the modern medicine can prevent incurable diseases. If doctors find a sickness very early, they can suspend stop the a spread of illness. Then doctors can give suitable medicines to patients which to help to them recover from a disease. In the world there are a great amount of remedies which is are used given to treat for a specific sicknesses. For example, a person falls ill with a influenza, he must take an aspirine. Then a patient will recover get over. The second advantage is that new modern equipment releave helps the doctors’ job. The equipment mechanism helps doctors go in the right direction is going to correct way. For instance, a pacient comes down with an illness and doctors cannot identify the a disease. At that point they do variety of examinations tests such as X-rays or blood tests. After evaluating the results, Checking up a human body the doctors know what a treatment to apply. In conclusion, the modern medicine is important for living because available medicine quickens [speeds up] a the cure of the sickness and a modern technology helps to find a disease faster.
Good job, interesting topic
Brian