the New Year's Eve dinner
Every foreign friends, do you know tomorrow is the Spring Festival ? Best wishes for a prosperous new year! Give me my red envelope! Haha…I want to show you some pictures to share my happiness .
The picture above is my family’s hearty dinner. You can see there are various kinds of meat. Don’t they looks very delicious? When all family members getting together enjoy the New Year's Eve dinner is the most happiest thing . I love my family. What a fantastic day!
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the New Year's Eve dinner
Every Foreign friends, do you know that tomorrow is the Spring Festival? Best wishes for a prosperous new year! Give me my red envelope! Haha…I want to show you some pictures to share my happiness.
The picture above is my family’s hearty dinner. You can see there are various kinds of meat. Don’t they looks very delicious? When all family members get together to enjoy the New Year's Eve dinner, it is the most happiest thing. I love my family. What a fantastic day!
Wow! What a delicious feast!
Be careful not to put a space before periods, question marks, commas, or exclamation points.
What ? >> What?
happiest thing . >> happiest thing.
This is a very common mistake with Japanese and Chinese speakers due to how we write kanji and hanzi on the computer. However, in English it looks strange when we do this. Even if your writing is 100% grammatical, this will be a dead giveaway to some people that it was written by a foreigner. A small mistake, yes, but one that's easy to fix and can drastically change how native speakers perceive your written work :)
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I forgot to mention in my correction, what do you mean by "red envelope"? I think this must be a tradition that we don't have in the US, I'm curious :)
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就看图片吃饱了w
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