my homework----a speech to run in the election of student council Hello,everyone.It's my honor to introduce myself to you. My name is Anna , a freshman from finance institute. I come here to run

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my homework----a speech to run in the election of student council Hello,everyone.It's my honor to introduce myself to you. My name is Anna , a freshman from finance institute. I come here to run for the position of being a member in student coucil. Although I have no related experience , I can make up with my passion and enthusiasm.In comparison，I consider passion and enthusiasm to be the most important thing in a job. What's more,I will try my best to accomplish my assignments if I am selected to be a member in the student council.Never will I let you down. That all!

Oct 10, 2010 5:22 AM

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my homework----a speech to run in the election of the or our student council

Hello,everyone.It's my honor to introduce myself to you. My name is Anna , a freshman from finance institute.

I have come here to introduce myself to you and to let you know that I am running for the position of a member of the student council run for the position of being a member in student coucil.

Although I have no related experience , I can make up with my passion and enthusiasm.
In comparison，I consider passion and enthusiasm to be the most important thing in a job two of the most important qualities for a member of the student council.

What's more,I will try my best to accomplish my assignments if I am selected to be a member in the student council.Never will I let you down I will never let you down.

That all! Thank you for your time and for listening to my presentation.

Anna - your speech was well-written. I just made some simple suggestions to make it a little better.

October 11, 2010

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