My Favorite Place

One of my favorite places is Lviv. It's a beautiful city in the west part of Ukraine. I visited it for the first time six years ago at first and since that time then I have been went there almost every year.
It's a pretty big city, but it is very cozy. There are old buildings, cathedrals, cobblestone roads, historical places and so on. I like this place because it has it's own amazing atmosphere. I like walking by on the cobblestones streets, looking at the surrounding surrounded houses and monuments and, also, I also like drinking hot chocolate in small cafes with wicker furniture.

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My Favourite Place

One of my favourite places is Lviv. It's a beautiful city in the west part of Ukraine. I visited it six years ago at first and since that time I have been there almost every year.
It's a pretty big city, but it is very cozy. There are old buildings, cathedrals, cobblestone roads, historical places and so on. I like this place because it has its own amazing atmosphere. I like walking on cobblestones streets, looking at the surrounded houses and monuments and, also, I like drinking hot chocolate in a small cafe with wicker furniture.

I will be grateful if you correct my mistakes. Thanks you in advance :)

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