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Be Careful Not To Get A Cold
Before we headed to each other's home, she said to me as a parting wish, "Be careful not to get a cold." That sounded kinda ridiculous because she was sick for three days. So I responded to her, snorting, "Are you telling me not to get a cold? It's you who should be careful with whatever."
And it's strange that now I feel like I'm getting a cold. I wouldn't be so happy to get mocked by her tomorrow. I'll sleep with a towel around my neck and see what happens.
Oct 21, 2010 3:33 PM
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Be Careful Not To Get A Cold
Before we headed home, she said to me as a parting wish, "Be careful not to catch a cold." That sounded kind of ridiculous because she was sick for the past three days. So I <strike>told to </strike>her, snorting, "Are you telling me not to catch a cold? It's you who should be careful with that."And it's strange that now I feel like I'm catching a cold. I won't be very happy when I get mocked by her tomorrow. I'll sleep with a towel around my neck and see what happens.
(빨간) Red = 대문자 Capitalized
(파란) Blue = 정정 & 철자 Correction and Spelling
(녹색) Green = 더 자연적인 방법으로 More natural way
(자주색) Purple = 내 생각에 / 코멘트 / 제안 My comment or suggestion
(밑줄) Underline = 구두점과 띄어쓰기 Punctuation &/or spacing
October 22, 2010
Be Careful Not To Get A Cold
Before we each headed <strike>to each other's</strike> home, she said to me as a parting wish, "Be careful not to get a cold." That sounded kinda ridiculous because she had been sick for three days. So I responded to her, snorting, "Are you telling me not to get a cold? It's you who should be careful with whatever."And it's strange that now I feel like I'm getting a cold. I wouldn't be so happy to get mocked by her tomorrow. I'll sleep with a towel around my neck and see what happens.
October 21, 2010
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Hailey
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English, Japanese, Korean
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English, Japanese
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